I finished a sestina!

[eredien]

I finished a sestina.
It took me about six years but as I realized earlier, "that's one more sestina than most people write in their lives."
I do not know if it is any good or not.
I am looking for people to critique it.
If you are interested please contact me here. 

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Comments

[eredien]

That does make sense! :D

[weirdquark]

I know nothing about poetry so am not a good person to critique it, but congratulations on finishing!

[eredien]

Thank you! That means a lot to me.

[gallian.livejournal.com]

Congratulations.

[thoughtsdriftby.livejournal.com]

Yeah!

Poems are important, it gets people to think.
They need more of that.

:-)