[Poem] Voyager I

[eredien]

Voyager I
to R., R., and L.

Like me,
love
does its work
in silence
and with time.

Pure ellipticals of
shifting bodies
break down
so far out here
into something
new and strange.
We're all past just that now.

What you have engraved
on my heart
is your heart
your voice
your self to share

I owe any future
I may meet
the best I remember
of you
the ones that set me here

in this moment
where my own momentum
carries me
forward
into
look
loves
configurations
no one's ever seen before.

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Comments

[sovay]

Pure ellipticals of
shifting bodies
break down
so far out here
into something
new and strange.

Send this one somewhere; it's good.

[eredien]

Thank you. I was thinking of sending it to Stone Telling, but they don't accept reprints, which I am afraid this would qualify as. Searching for other markets.

[sovay]

I was thinking of sending it to Stone Telling, but they don't accept reprints, which I am afraid this would qualify as. Searching for other markets.

Is it friendlocked or filtered? If so, it's still fair game.