Editing Email Forwards

[eredien]

Short version: I hate email forwards, but people still send them to me.

This is the email forward I got:

This is the new version (click once to open and again to play):

Comments

[faerieboots.livejournal.com]

Two things:

1) Your edit is awesome.

2) As I was reading the first one, I kept thinking, "This is so full of assumptions about gender and class. Who would send this to Eredien? I mean, do they KNOW her?" It made me really happy to see how you responded to that. :)