If we want men, women, and people of all genders to believe in the value of women as individuals and as a whole, we all agree that we have to stop treating femininity as if it is not as valuable, desired, or indeed present as masculinity. We especially have to stop treating femininity as if it is not as valuable, desired, or indeed present as masculinity when that femininity is found in or with something and/or someone male.
We have to stop treating femininity as if it is not as valuable, as desired, or indeed as present as masculinity. We especially have to stop treating femininity as if it is not as valuable, as desired, or indeed as present as masculinity when that femininity is found in or with something and/or someone male.
That should clear up any grammar confusion. "We have to stop treating femininity as if it is not present as masculinity" is not what I meant to say, and I realized it could be read that way due to the absence of an article. (I'd like to thank my parents, Ann Raynd and God, for pointing out this error.)
Quick clarification
We have to stop treating femininity as if it is not as valuable, as desired, or indeed as present as masculinity. We especially have to stop treating femininity as if it is not as valuable, as desired, or indeed as present as masculinity when that femininity is found in or with something and/or someone male.
That should clear up any grammar confusion. "We have to stop treating femininity as if it is not present as masculinity" is not what I meant to say, and I realized it could be read that way due to the absence of an article. (I'd like to thank my parents, Ann Raynd and God, for pointing out this error.)